The best sentences to create hooks from are "Hunt has described the world as "sword-punk", and was specifically inspired by stories of wandering ronin and the idea of a survivor travelling a wasteland." and "On his general mantra for designing the game, Hunt stated that he considered himself as the player's enemy." Please try new hooks using those. I recommend rewording the hook without using the word creator. ALT1 is a bit more interesting, but needs work. ALT0 is not appealing to a broad audience, and offers little information about the game. When multiple citations are used, they should be in numerical order, that is and so on. Length, sourcing and neutrality are good. Overall: Created and nominated on the same day, therefor new enough. Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: Y.Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems General: Article is new enough and long enough Flibirigit ( talk) 04:12, 2 February 2019 (UTC) Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Asim ChaudhryĬreated by Nomader ( talk). that the creator of Kenshi was inspired by stories of wandering ronin in creating the game? Source: "Kenshi has a lot of influences, particularly the concept of a wandering desperate Samurai ronin, or a hungry survivor roaming a desolate wasteland." ( ) that the creator of Kenshi initially had to have a part-time security guard job in order to make ends meet while making the game? Source: "For the first five or six years, I worked alone on it full time whilst juggling a minimum wage security guard job during the nights to get by." ( )
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